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I didn't like it quite much. Although I play piano, and thus classical music, this isn't really what I would put in the classical genre. It's too... well, it's just not a part of the stream, it's not of the common type. Ever listened to Beethoven, Chopin, Bach, Mozart and Grieg before? Listen to some of their best known melodies, and you should get a better grip on what "good classical music" is considered to be.
I don't like to criticize, but this really isn't what most people consider to be good stuff. Not to me neither. If I as a musician (and I have played the piano for many years, I tell you) was to listen to this melody without knowing the name of it, I wouldn't be able to see the "content" in this melody. And I don't think the name of the title fits to the melody neither.
Author's Response:
1. I recognize I suck at placing songs in their correct genres.
2. I choose the name from 3 names presented to me by Leoshi (who is amazing at songing)
3. If you're going to focus on the name and what genre I [failed to] put it in, why bother, those are pretty unimportant.
4. True, but then again, John Carpenter's 'Holloween' doesn't sound like Beet, Chop, Bach, Mozart, or Grieg, yet the peice is still awesome. Not all classical is the same. They may be 'the classics' but that doesn't mean their aren't other variations on what can be called 'good'
5. Other than that, yeah pretty much...
Thanks for the review ;)
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This is some real shit. I'm downloading this.
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I'm writing a book as a hobby, and I got a quite fitting scene:
The war is over, and a child is spreading the message throughout a panicking city. Peace is being restored, and the child watches up in the air, and sees snow.
I'm downloading this :)
Author's Response:
Go ahead ;)
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I get a hell of an imagination when I hear this:
A dark presence is coming. The earth is trembling, panick spreads faster the wind. People begin to scream in fear, madness is consuming feeble minds, and then, a shadow appears, covering an entiry city in chaos. The skies are covered by black clouds, lightning strikes several tall places on the city, causing it to burn.
Seriously, you should make more stuff like this one.
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I can hear that you tried to make it doomy - you succeeded, but not well.
When I think of the "end of the world"-concept with some kind of music, I usually find that music to not have a guitar in it, more orchestra and lots of SFX. You aren't telling much about the track in your own comments (I've listened to another of your soundtracks), and thus the motive in the song is quite unclear, except for the name, which isn't even fitting if its a doomy track.
I'm sure you like such things, but I don't, at least. Make something that's not as focused on one thing - you gotta get a balance in the song. Your song however, has no balance.
Listen to other soundtracks, and learn.
Author's Response:
Right, an apocalyptic track called "Empty Chambers"... (probably you refered to the word doom, not to doom metal, =))).
I guess you missed the whole point on this one... Balance you say? Oh, this one is very balanced... just needs some better ideas toward the end of it... It has good parts and others not so good... but it has some cohesiveness, if you fail to hear it, it's not my problem... after all you don't have to like it... and I'm sure you have no f00king idea what doomy/doom/gothic metal means... You should stick with some other musical geners, not with METAL. You understand nothing from it.
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"This song screams one word:"
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVE!!!!!!!!!!
That's one of the best songs suiting a raveparty I've ever heard. It's damn fitting for raveparties, and I can imagine how it would be: AWESOME.
Author's Response:
Lol that would be kinda random/awesome.
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The name of this song is Scandinavian. I was kinda puzzled to find something like this.
Anyways, this song is kinda cool.
Author's Response:
Glad you like the song. :-)
-Gravey-
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CHOCOBO!!!
... Awesome. There's nothing more to say about it.
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The lyrics are just pure awesome. And the rest - PURE AWESOME.
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The title of the song implicates a song with a war-theme, you know. So, you fail at giving it a proper name.
I didn't like the song much otherwise, and there's not much to say about it.
Author's Response:
idc lol, but thanks dud
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